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A Phenomenal Man - Visitor's Poem

by Jamie Robinson
(Syracuse, NY, USA)

When I walk by women see my size and the deepness of my eyes

They stare and wonder about my future, am I like other guys?

God has placed a big heart in my chest to love, this I will, this I can

From the top of my head, to the soles of my feet, I am a phenomenal man

My big biceps contract to pull my woman up if she should fall

I have strong shoulders that absorb her tears, and her fears I can carry all

My strong legs enable me to walk tall, my head parallel to the sky

Behind my eyes lie a beautiful soul, I'm not afraid to cry

My feet are planted firm, where many weak men ran

I'm the lion in the jungle, the love in your passion, I'm a phenomenal man

Beads of sweat drip from my brow as I work hard to lighten the load

If the journey seems too rough to travel, I will pave the road

My hands are big and strong, they're made to raise the children of the land

My intentions bring actions and satisfaction, I am a phenomenal man

Where there is doubt, I bring faith, where there is sickness I promote health

For every item my woman brings home, I contstruct another shelf

I have a strong back that makes you react like an animal when we make love

My full beautiful lips kiss you, like the wind touches a dove

Tell me your wants, desires, and dreams, through God I will fulfill all that I can

My bold neck gives a nod of respect to the one who made me a phenomenal man

The flesh of my chest creates a firm pillow for the beautiful head of my queen

You see, she is a phenomenal woman, together we are a phenomenal team

From the swagger of my walk, to the power of my talk,
I complement the land

My loyalty complements her trust, this I was taught when my life began

I came in this world as a small boy
I will leave this world nothing less than a phenomenal man.

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A Phenomenal Man - Visitor's Poem

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Nov 16, 2009
Appreciation
by: Anonymous

I have never read such a beautiful poem in my life!!! Your words make me smile and I have been fortunate in this life to have met and married a phenomenal man. I feel your passion as you speak. Your words move me in my spirit. I cannot wait to read many more of your poems, for you have a gift.

Oct 13, 2009
I am confident
by: TheEssence

Dear Fellow Poet,
I am not normally lost for words but I refrain from saying anything for fear that a general term is not enough to convey my heart. You have a gift and I am confident in this one thing " He which has begun a good work in you will perform it until the day of Jesus Christ" Phil 1:6! Keep writing... For I am you, you are me, and together with many others we be the voice that is not afraid to speak for it is our words that sets minds and hearts free! God Bless you!

Your sister in verse and rhyme,
LaBentria "TheEssence" Brooks

Sep 28, 2009
Poem
by: kay

What a wonderful poem. As I searched the net for a poem for my Man. I came across this one. Outstanding job. Thanks

Jul 10, 2009
WOW!
by: Cortez

I had to write you a comment. This poem is amazing. As a young man I feel a connection to this poem. This poem came right when I needed motivation to continue to be an upstanding male. I just would like to thank you for creating such an amazing poem.

Jun 17, 2009
I'm Lovin It'
by: M'Shel

I'm so proud to say that this is my MAN! I love you Jamie...You are awesome at what you do! Keep up the good work.

Jun 15, 2009
What desirable qualities!
by: Fion

Hi Jamie, thanks for sharing this poem! It paints of a man with great qualities and we want more of such phenomenal men to walk the land!

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