by Amanda Dzioba (West Allis, Wisconsin, United States)
Dance your own danceSing your own songWrite your own bookLive your own life
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Submitted by: Karr
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Comment Dear Amanda, Enjoyed your poem. Just a suggestion; maybe you could rewrite the last line to rhyme with song? Think about an alternative last line that ends with belong? I thought of a few... Karr, Charleston, SC
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