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Orion - Visitor's Inspirational Poem

by Mehul Gandhi
(Norristown, PA, USA)

When your life is as fragile as broken glass
And you can’t manage to get a free pass
Abandoned and vulnerable like you’ve lost your fight
Alone in an empty room without a single light
Feeling frozen and numb in this frigid, harsh reality
Wondering how to deal with this shattered mentality
Always remember, you are not alone
There is courage in the sky, it has forever been known
Like a strong-willed Titan in the battlefield of life
Providing piercing strength like a sharpened knife
He’ll battle side by side to annihilate your fears
And illuminate your path to success for years
So, when everything in life has gone ablaze
Conquer those dreadful days
And don’t let life pass you by
Soak up the courage in the sky

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Orion - Visitor's Inspirational Poem

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Nov 26, 2008
Orion
by: Vaish

The poem was very well-written, I liked it! I found the first half somewhat dismal, but I guess you needed that to contrast with the hope of the second half. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the second half, to find hope and courage in nature and everyday happenings and to not let life pass you by I think is inspirational. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more :)

Nov 20, 2008
Amazing poem
by: mu-mu

Mr. Gandhi,
You have written many good poems and I think I have read most of them but this is by far your more advanced work. I really do like the poem first off because of the subject of it and second because of how you presented it with the Titan symbolism. You definitely very creative and a great poet. I love reading your poems and when I read this, I really did feel inspired. With Medical school, I usually feel very down, but reading this poem makes me feel that I can do this. You really do have a very great talent. And I absolutely loooove this poem. Like I have said before it is my 2nd favorite poem. I would've been first but I am biased with the first one because that was about our friendship. But other than that, I think you have grown so much as a poet (it feel weird to call u that lol). I remember reading your poems when you first started writing them and reading them now, its such a huge difference and improvement. And this poem just goes to show that you do have a very good talent.

ps: so when am I getting my next poem?

Nov 20, 2008
:)
by: Tia

Yay Mehul :)

"Feeling frozen and numb in this frigid, harsh reality
Wondering how to deal with this shattered mentality"

Those are my favorite lines. As usual, awesome poem :)

Nov 19, 2008
Soaking up courage
by: Fion

Hi Mehul, thanks so much for sharing your inspiring poem! I believe that courage is needed to triumph over many of life challenges. And your last two lines serve as a strong reminder -
"And don’t let life pass you by
Soak up the courage in the sky"

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