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Sometimes - Visitor's Poem

by Barnali Saha
(Nashville, TN)

Sunset Bright.

Sunset Bright.

Sometimes I miss you more than the world,
Sometimes I yearn for your touch,
When beside me you sit and breathe,
I long to smell that warmth.

Sometimes I feel I love you more than the world,
more than the "things" I crave.
Incapacitated by a strange numbness, seldom I can say,
That I uncontrollably want you, just you.
Like an insensate, pummeled lump of clay,
Drowned, I the troglodyte might lay,
I know to my rescue you would come.
Despite the curmudgeon that I have been, unknowingly.

Yet, devoid of all feelings, numb, soporific when I am,
An inkling of hope in me springs out,
And like a lightning, a shot of acute pain
It tells me that you are the only "thing" I want.

Written by Barnali Saha Banerjee
Nashville TN

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Sometimes - Visitor's Poem

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Oct 30, 2008
Thanks Fion
by: Barnali

Dear Fion,

Thank you for your comment. I was reading some of your poems in this website, they are fabulous. I couldn't comment on them, I think the section is blocked. But I loved the poems 'Beautiful Woman''simple love' and 'A few Moments' the most. You are a complete, professional writer.

Barnali

Oct 30, 2008
Wanting the Love We Have
by: Fion

Hi Barnali, thanks for another wonderful contribution! You carefully drawn out how a person in love would feel at times. Uncontrollable wanting, and yet amazed that the other could love us for what we are despite our shortcomings. You're the learned one with an expansive vocabulary, while I have to hurry to the dictionary for answers. It's a pleasure to have your poems at my site :)

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