I carry you about Within me Or Maybe without : A void That gives meaning To my presence, The spectral past That haunts Daunts Taunts My formless future.
When we met, Uncertain partners In the locus Of a labyrinthine doubt, Our shadows struggled, Strived, distraught, To see Through The distance, To ribbon The romance Of the present, Our present.
My tomorrow, For the moment, Is fraught, Just a stray, scary thought… Wafting through The wilderness Of what may never Have happened…
If so… What am I… Who are you… Why is it we fought… What is it we sought… And What have our memories All been about?
Your poem is unique and sentimental, it is a garland of beautiful emotions that evoke feelings of love and friendship. It is a poem that makes you feel good about life despite the thousand hardships we face.
Wonderful work and I wish to see more such inspiring poems from you.
Barnali
Apr 24, 2009
So much within so little by: Fion
Hi Gargi, thanks very much for your beautiful poem! There's much meaning within these short little lines. A longing for the past and uncertainty for the future. Really enjoyed these lines:
"To ribbon
The romance
Of the present,
Our present."
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